Lesson review

Today I have completed section one of the radio treatment.
I have to complete the other sections, I will do this by monday.

Section 1 is distinction and 2  is merit, there is clear room for many possibilities in this show.

The second section needs more detail to achieve the distinction level.

I need to go over the sections I have completed and expand on them. I need to make clear how I can make more possibilities in the shows.